your story is not given a story feel,,, it is just like a dialogue writing,,,,, for drama purpose ku ezhuthina pola katchi 1 katchi2 than missing,,,,, you describing the scenes neenga story ya narrate pannala,,, please change your narration,,, narration vera dialogue writing vera feel the difference,,, news vasikkira summary mari irukku
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